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A Haiku Collection

For Valentine's Day

by Dale Neibaur

 

On Valentine's Day

The neighbor's dog with

Graceful golden flourish signs

My empty mailbox.

 

 

The Gift

With velvet paws she

Pounces on his red paper heart—

Accustomed prey.

 

 

Father of the Bride

New love sings in joy;

But the old grieves silently

In your empty room

 

 

Good Night I

Impatient for Love?

Perhaps I am. But can't we

Discuss it later?

 

 

Good Night II

The curve of your smile

As we dim the last light is

The sweetest gift yet.

 

 

After Loving You

A silvered thread among

The tangled flames upon my breast;

And still my heart stops.

 

 

Faithfully Yours (2003)

I will fear winter

Nevermore, for in your arms

Bides eternal spring

 

 

 

[One of the delights of haiku is its combination of vivid imagery and murky meaning. One of the really obnoxious limitations of haiku is its combination of vivid imagery and murky meaning.  Steve & I swapped haiku verses during early February 2001.  He couldn't figure out what on earth I was talking about, so I added titles to give readers a hint of where I was going.

The emotional rewards of a spouse and children are tied for me to people and places more than to times, so many of my holiday emotions still link unfiltered to my childhood and early adolescence. And romantic love was a strange brew of longing and fear, distilled and hoarded when it should have been given away. My children have taught me much about myself. I watch Shawn struggling mightily with his yearning to be lovable; his wit sparkles and gleams as it indiscriminately slices everything within his ever-lengthening reach. I laugh and stand close, bleeding. And I remember ...]

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